I Googled Ken Marsden, he is the man who is reviewing my manuscript. I found out that he is a renown researcher. He lives in the UK and can be hired to research family history, specializing in military history. If anyone is interested in finding out more go to: http://www.the-abbotts-of-canterbury.com and find his listing, which contains his email contact information.
He told me that prior commitments prevent him from focusing on my manuscript until the end of July. This is cutting it close if I want to release the book in August but we'll see how it plays out.